articulation

poetry - n. 1: writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rythmn 2 a: a quality that stirs the imagination b: a quality of spontaneity and grace

Name: dthaase

Thursday, December 09, 2004

XIV


Here I'm in the celebration of life;
counting out syllables for this sonnet,
thinking this is turning like a sharp knife
at the bone, I hack to feast upon it.
As I open yet another quatrain,
peeling back the meat of my memories,
definitely going against the grain
yet sensing a oneness as salt in seas.
It's here that I happen to realize
the beauty of a cut, deep in the mind,
when articulated as with new eyes,
will foster growth letting new life to pine.
I wonder in words where it all will lead
and to think, never did I even bleed.

1 Comments:

Blogger Bryan said...

Hey Dan,
Good to see you the other night.
I enjoyed this poem, I can see your going places you can only go when your writing regularly.
Once I got to "hack" I could feel the flow.
The "celebration of Life" sounds okay, but does seem more vague when I reread the poem.
Maybe you could explain or show more of going against the grain, if indeed it is a pivotal moment.
The last six lines are great, very Frost-like, eh?
Keep writing, loving and living,
Bryan

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